My Sister In Law
Rest in peace 💋❤️
My Sister In Law
I find no peace in my broken heart,
it cracks again when nights restart
a quiet wound that doesn’t heal
a loss too deep for time to steal
I drift through days with hollow eyes
each breath a truth the silence hides
the world moves on, I stay behind
with thoughts that will not leave my mind
I speak, but no one hears me right
I dream, but only late at night
and when I wake, it falls apart
the weight returns, my broken heart
They say time heals, but they lie
the pain is constant, and I don’t ask why
it gnaws and tears with every breath
a shadow that won’t let me forget
I miss you, Brenda Hurst, my sister-in-law
I miss our chats, our laughs, our moans on the phone
our family memories won’t leave me alone.
you closed your eyes and went to sleep
Febraury 15th 2025 rest in peace. We love you ❤️
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Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
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Comments (2)
Deepest sorrow to your sister in law. poem and well written.
Aweee Marie 😪 tears fills my eyes as I read this 😥 Sorry for your loss😪 Sending love and hugs ❤️ Such heart broken poem for your sister in law 💔