My mind makes madness
Madness many maintain
Maintain my mind!
Mind management may move mountains
Mountains monsters made me mean
Mean minded make many mistakes
Mistakes my mind mends
Mends me more, much more
More medicine may maintain my mind
Mind mentality my mom made
Made me mean
Mean -minded mistreated
Mistreated makes madness
Madness moves multiple minds
Minds make money
Money mix mindsets
Mindset made multiple messes
Messes my mind mishandled
Mishandled made madness
Madness many maintained
Maintained my mind
My mind madness
Mind madness makes mad minds
Mad minds make much more misconstrued mistakes
Misconstrued mistakes miss maintain my mindset
My mindset made me mentally
Me mentally mad
muwhahaha!
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Dark Memoirs - Index There are at least two kinds of people in the world: those who write this half-arsed kind of intro to a story that looks to separate the rare and the norm, and those who realise it's an overused framing device and don't.
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Comments (7)
this is impressive, you were ably to create a sense of rhythm despite the surreal word flow and alliteration. Sometimes the rhythm felt deliberately stilted, but not quite disjointed and it served to emphasize the theme of madness. Like a dance that appears chaotic on the surface.
Your use of alliteration throughout is so fitting!! It suits the madness of the piece so well!
Emily this was a Masterful tautogram! I love all the words you chose and then way you told a story! My favourite M word was the maniacal laugh "muwhahaha!"
Really good.Love it.☺️
Wow! I’m impressed
This is sooo good! Very deep and thought-provoking. Excellent!! 😍
Very well done. :) Loved it.