My life would be empty
Don't judge me...
I love the gym...
It gives me peace
when I'm down on my knees.
This place is where I find myself...
Working out...
it's the best thing that ever happened to me,
exercise heals not only my body
but my soul as well
when it feel like hell...
I'm burning memories,
not calories,
and if you understand these,
I'm sorry for you...
and what you've been through.
God bless you on your journey,
and believe me!
You'll be
very proud of your old "me".
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It all started when Echo was five. She kept having these nightmares where she would just fall into a dark pit, screaming insanely loud, yet no one, not even her own parents would hear her. It was terrifying. But the most horrible part was that when she'd wake up panting, her parents were nowhere to be found, just like in her dream. She'd always cry herself to sleep alone and helpless.
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Superb Anna! You are a great poet.💯. Have a look on my poems too 🥰
This poem offers a new context of Gym. The repetition of "I love the gym" is amazing. The contrast between being down on your knees and finding peace in the gym seems an emotional journey. The lines "exercise heals not only my body but my soul as well' are extraordinary. The powerful metaphor is "I'm burning memories, not calories". Great job Anna!
great work!!
You have to do what is best for you and congrats on fifty subscribers (sorry I am already subscribed )
Fifty subscribers already? Congratulations! Regular exercise is both healing and freeing. It wakes you up in the morning and provides the mental stamina to make it through a hard day. Excellent poem!