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I can't believe you want to leave me now,
Why after all these years of happiness together?
I don't want to hear this anymore,
My heart thrown into the fire,
Burning down to the ground,
Smouldering to smokey snow,
Like a fire,
Burning to,
Ashes.
About the Creator
Carol Ann Townend
I'm a writer who doesn't believe in sticking with one niche.
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme


Comments (5)
This perfectly captures the destruction of feeling abandoned. Capturing such emotion with your writing is a talent.
Very nice.
This is beautiful
Felt it ,nice work you done
Beautiful and poignant, Carol.