My First Lanterne Poem
2025 Vocal's Lantern light Challenge
Stars
Shine bright
Like Lanterns
Making Pathways
Lights
🎏🎏🎏🎏🎏
Light
Shine Bright
Into Night
Rays of starlight
Spark
✨️✨️✨️✨️
Sun
Day light
Into Night
Spark At Midnight
Light
🧨🧨🧨🧨
Spark
Up High
In The Sky
Camouflage Moon
Red
******
Gleam
Gaslight
Artificial
Light In The Sky
Beam
🎉🎉🎉🎉
Beam
Diamond
In The Night
Bright In The Sky
Gleam
🪢🪢🪢🪢
Top
Light Luz
Spark up Hope
Intelligent
Night
♦️♦️♦️♦️♦️
High
Fly Light
Higher Up
Heaven Can See
Luz
🎴🎴🎴🎴
Sea
Mirror
Light In Sky
illuminate
Dark
✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️
Wish
Lighting
Flashing light
Dancing Above
Sky
🎑🎑🎑🎑
Clear
The Night
With Fire Light
Lantern Tonight
Flight
About the Creator
Mariann Carroll
Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.
Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .
fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living
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Comments (12)
Nicely formed
I like you how you have personified the night by saying it’s intelligent, and I just generally like the message of these lines particularly, “Spark up Hope Intelligent Night”. ☺️
Lively & Lovely!
This is an interesting take. I like the rhythm of the poem.
What a wonderful poem, Mariann! I loved both the form and rhythm of it.
I loved it, so simple and lovely imagery.
The rhythm and parallelism in this poem was just so good, something I appreciate. Well done, this one was lit... 😜
This is so whimsical and uplifting! ✨
I didn't know what was Luz so I had to Google it. Spanish for light! Your poem was soooo bright and lovely!
Absolutely beautiful Mariann. Lights of all different kinds. Nicely done!
And lovely lantern light shines from you and this poem, Mariann.
Oh. I love that ending Mariann. A lantern light for all to benefit from it glow. Lovely. And thank you so much.