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I love you, I love you, I love you!
Oh my GOD, how I love you!
I love love love love love you!
I totally completely lovitty love love LOVE you!
Love, love, love
Lovely lovely love!
I love you so!
I just need you!
Actually
on second thought...
nah.
About the Creator
Sam Spinelli
Trying to make human art the best I can, never Ai!
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Comments (6)
Haha “ on second thought, nah” lol I'm so done with you 😂😂. Amazing poem.
🤣🤣🤣 the repitious exaggeration, changing to sincerity, then changing the mind entirely and leaving us to guess what the feeling you actually felt, was— brings out the humour and playfulness really well. 👌🏾👏🏾❤️
I love the ending! Great!
Lol funny ending. I love this poem… on second thought, I still love it! Great work’
Omggg, this was soooo relatable! Like seriously, lol. I don't think it's mad stupid but it's brilliant!
I know this is gonna seem mad stupid to everybody else, but if we're allowed to have favorites of our own poems, this might be mine. It's definitely self-satirizing because I've been here before. I try not to be shallow but, there've been too many times where I get a huge rush of "Love at first sight" attraction to someone I've only just met for the first time, then later I see a red flag or my mood just changes and whatever crazy, stupid level of infatuation I felt for her just disappears. There one minute and then poof-- gone! The challenge asks for "romantic, platonic, or self-love". This poem might be stretching that too much-- the only love here is brief flash of infatuation. Obsessive love, unsustainable.