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My Crush

This poem reflects my feelings.

By MuraliPublished about a year ago 1 min read
My Crush
Photo by Kelly Sikkema on Unsplash

At the bus stand, I stand alone,
A heart that yearns, yet feels unknown.
She wears her pink dress once a week,
A silent beauty, my voice so meek.

I don’t know her name, her voice, her smile,
But in her face, I find my while.
In her eyes, I lose my way,
Yet words to speak, I can’t convey.

My thoughts are tangled, fears in place,
I question worth, doubt my face.
Insecure and lost, I long to be,
The one she notices, the one she sees.

But how to bridge this silent space,
To win her heart, to find my place?
With trembling voice, I wish to start,
A simple “hi” to speak my heart.

Her pink dress sways, a weekly light,
In that moment, all feels right.
But still, I wait, unsure, unseen,
In this silent, distant dream.

Yet hope remains, a tiny spark,
To overcome this lingering dark.
With courage small, I’ll take a stand,
And maybe one day, touch her hand.

I DON'T KNOW HOW TO INTERACT WITH HER, PLEASE HELP ME GUYS 🥺

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  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    In our university we have a speaking club called Gavel club. In that also one day we talked about our crushes. So you reflected it to me. Thank you very much.

  • Kodahabout a year ago

    Aww this was so sweet! Definitely compliment her pink dress, you could easily start a conversation from that point! Introduce yourself after complimenting her, the more you push yourself the more you'll see the effort and progress! 💌

  • Anna about a year ago

    Lovely poem, don't miss that person!!

  • Awww, this was so sweet. Maybe you can try giving her a smile first. Take things slow. If she smiles back that's great and the next day, you can say hi and introduce yourself. If she doesn't smile back, run! Because that means she's a psycho like me, lol. Jokes aside, I hope it works out well for you. Keep us updated!

  • Shirley Belkabout a year ago

    I love all the tips you have in the comments. Your poem was beautiful.

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Awww, here's the thing - you can just smile and compliment her on her prink dress…just say, "I love that pink dress on you, it makes you sparkle. My name is Murali, what's yours?" When you give honest, genuine compliments, people respond because they know you are not being fake.

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Just go up and say 'Hi, my name is____. How's it going? Good work.

  • Manisha Dhalaniabout a year ago

    Gather the courage to say that 'hi'. I'm sure you can do it :) Be nice, be genuine. All the best!

  • Kendall Defoe about a year ago

    First thing: do not give this poem to her right away. Try to find out more about her and then talk to her. You can just say 'hello' and see if she ignores you or smiles and responds positively.

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