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My Bedroom

I want to sleep, but...

By Sone KramerPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in the Snafu Senryu Challenge

I want to sleep, but

there are strangers in my bed; I

live on my friend’s couch.

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(drawing by my friend, Tong, of his couch)

childrens poetry

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Sone Kramer

navigating earth

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  • Raymond G. Taylor2 years ago

    Great senryu and love the illustration. Congrats on your win!

  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    😁 Hey, good one! Congrats on your runner up prize! 😊👏

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    Not the best way to make new friends - or maybe... LOL congratulations!

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Congratulations!

  • Maddy Haywood2 years ago

    Love this Senryu!

  • Kristen Balyeat2 years ago

    Haha! Yeah, that's awkward. lol! Love the image on this one!

  • E.K. Daniels2 years ago

    Relatable.

  • 💓

  • Rachel Deeming2 years ago

    Some people are so inconsiderate especially when there's floor that's perfectly good to sit on.

  • Margaret Brennan2 years ago

    I always found it difficult to sleep in anyone's house. Still do. I'm too aware that, while walls really don't talk, sometimes, they do, and I just might hear every word.

  • Joe Patterson2 years ago

    Gotta love company.

  • Jennifer David2 years ago

    Relateable and rough. yikes! love the image

  • Dylan 2 years ago

    I love it! 😂 Great Senryu!

  • Oh nooooo! That's definitely awkward. And inconvenient.

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