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Mud Puddled Love

Breakup Nonet

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished about a year ago 1 min read

We connected like oil and water

Leaving a film, casting shadows

Rainbows wearing disguises

A light refracting lie

Obsessed with puddles

Shining smears

Like spotlights

Selling

Dreams

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About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • Christy Munsonabout a year ago

    Love the way you've written this one. Insightful writing!

  • Kristen Balyeatabout a year ago

    Love this piece, Kelli! Beautiful work!

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Just beautiful and showing change somehow.

  • This was so poignantly beautiful!

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Perfectly written

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    Nice work from you.

  • Jack Friendabout a year ago

    This is so, so good.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    So many good lines here. Especially "Rainbows wearing disguises A light refracting lie." Well done.

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