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Mountain memory

Inspired by a first walk to a lookout

By Jon CoatesPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Mountain memory
Photo by Joshua Anderson on Unsplash

Together we climb

Big steps for a little girl

Look dad! Broccoli!

nature poetry

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Jon Coates

Sydney-based. Dabbling in writing from time to time.

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  • Kaliyah Myers3 years ago

    This is so heartfelt and wonderful! Thank you for sharing! 💜

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