
(Wattle growing near a lookout in the Blue Mountains)
Golden wattle breeze
drifting warmly while I climb
the mountain in spring
About the Creator
Jon Coates
Sydney-based. Dabbling in writing from time to time.
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Compelling and original writing
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Excellent storytelling
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The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
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This is beautiful!