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Mortgage

Life of a homeowner

By Obsidian WordsPublished 8 months ago 1 min read
Mortgage
Photo by Breno Assis on Unsplash

I built this home in silence

Steel beams, a fortitude long built,

Forged by molten anger,

Bricks of betrayal and

A mortar of silver linings—

The fusion between my logic

And the knowledge that such logic

Could not change the pain.

My roof leaks from time to time

And I chase the sun in those pin-prick points

And pray I find salvation.

See the facade and paint and poetry

Are all metaphors and masks

Gyprock plaster over broken bones

Split lips over bleached teeth,

Laughter that echoes in empty chests.

I took the hurt, the anger,

The desperate emptiness

And quietly sketched the blueprints

Over long nights not acquainted with sleep

Until the job was done—

I built a home the wolf would laugh at

And everyone commended the achievement.

inspirationalMental Healthsocial commentaryStream of Consciousness

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Obsidian Words

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock8 months ago

    This makes me think of the movie that begins with a Sunday dinner with extended family seated at tables stretching end to end from the kitchen through the dining room & into the living room, which subsequently ends with a couple seated in the living room with tray tables in front of the tv. But for the life of me I can't remember the name of the movie. We've gone from the extended family with deep roots in the community to isolated transience, all within my lifetime. I get that sense of loss which so many celebrate in this, Obsidian.

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