Morning Sunshine
A short diminishing syllable poem to start up your day
By Mo DarasiPublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by Bob van Aubel on Unsplash
Across the sea, in a marvellous scene
As the sun reveals itself to me
Its shine glistens upon saline
Captures the soul, unseen
Mind ever so serene
For the day ahead
Ready. Pristine
Gone the night
Once more
Flee
About the Creator
Mo Darasi
I write fiction, poetry and occasional articles about interesting topics.
Finding interesting ways to write a poem or hide messages within them seems to be my main interesting in writing now, and it's been fun
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Truly gorgeous, Mohammed!! 🥹❤️❤️ Also, the diminishing style works divinely with your words here!
Gosh this was so breathtakingly beautiful!
Lovely words, just lovely. Well done, Modammed!