Moonstruck
A Reminder from a Faithful Companion
I forget too often to look up.
The night
And the spectacle revealed as the light fades
Still fill me with childlike wonder.
The moon,
Constant companion, nearest neighbor -
No less a mystery than the cosmos itself,
Tugs at my curiosity as it does the seas.
Dancing,
Performing in a duet choreographed by the Ages
And practiced since birth,
It reminds me to strive for perfection.
Balanced
And balancing us in a constant exchange
Of forces beyond our comprehension,
It reminds me to seek equilibrium.
Battered
And scarred, it continues its journey,
Faithfully completing its cycle over the eons,
Reminding me to weather the storms.
Minuscule
In the vastness of the beyond,
Playing a part in a symphony of untold dimensions,
It reminds me that we are a part of something far bigger than we can imagine.
Hidden
Save for the reflection of a light not its own,
It still moves oceans and calls to the creatures below,
Reminding me that nothing – and no one - is insignificant.
Copyright ©November 8, 2021, Dana O. Crandell. All rights resereved.
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Dana Crandell
Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.
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My poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity
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Comments (36)
Beautiful imagery! Congrats on the TS - and your many wins. 💜
Excellent poem!
The moon is one of the mysteries of the universe - just like the oceans are. They are mysterious and it never gets old staring at them. I love the moon and the stars and the ocean waves. If they could talk you wonder what they would say, they must have seen so much. Absolutely beautiful - Nicely Done Dana
Beautiful & full of wisdom! Nicely done Dana!
Beautiful. Thoughtful. Inspirational.
What a wonderful poem that is both coherent and beautiful! You are right, none of us are insignificant and the moon has been our ever-faithful companion. Great job!
Your words beautifully capture the awe and inspiration the night sky evokes. The moon's dance, its endurance, and its role in the grand cosmic ballet are profound reminders of our own journeys and significance. Thank you for sharing this poetic reflection!
Penned so nicely. Loving even the mundane and routine. Because who doesn't love the tides or a sunrise!?
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This was beautiful, Dana. Poignant and perfectly timed. Sometimes you need a good soul stirring. 😀
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Stunning! Loved the lines “Hidden Save for the reflection of a light not its own,” dare say there’s some rich layers of meaning that can be drawn from those lines and many others
Fantastic, Dana. This is riveting and stunning.
Very deep and moving.
In general, I love the night sky. It's perfect on a crisp winter night with snow. This was beautifully descriptive.
Very nice poem, keep looking up!
Yeah, buddy!!! As a Cancerian my ruling sign. I've got Moon connections that defy description, so reading a MOON poem that you've written Dana...what can I say? Will always get my vote and a 'WOO-HOOOO!!!' Thanks so much for writing and sharing! Kudos for it being featured!
Wow. Powerful poem! Congratulations on Top Story! 🎉🎉🎉 And congratulations on the Creators we are loving today!🎉🎉🎉
Oh my, I can't believe I've never seen this one, Dana! This is so, so gorgeous. 🥹❤️ Happy New Year! ❤️
Congratulations on your top story. This is really beautiful. 
And Congrats on Top story !
Beautiful poem I love the moon and connection to it 🌕this poem tells a lot about the hidden truth of it 😊!
Stunning! Bravo, Dana!
very nice job!
Incandescent Luna beckons, inspiring us to mirror her beauty! Well done!