Singing together in the park
Feeling like we could float in the sky
And then you decided to throw those memories to trash
to broke my heart and leaving without saying goodbye
But I don't want you back
What I want you to give me back is all my wasted time
I gave you kind words and you gave me caresses stained with lies
What kind of monster does that?
It was the most beautiful night that I ever had
Never thought that it was with a monster with who I shared that night
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Amazing! This poem reflects the betrayal of a person whom you loved once. But instead of love, he returned spikes and betrayal that can be seen through your poem. Calling him a 'MONSTER' is quite a confident thing to say. I liked your poem ✨✔ Keep it up <3 You can read mine too, I wrote a poem 'The Day I die' That's also about a 'betrayer'. We can support each other's work.