
i stumbled into
my local milk bar
and asked ever so nicely
peter jackson,
extra mild,
thirties.
he grabbed my darts
placed them on the counter
expecting
to proceed
to the next part
of this financial intercourse
i grabbed the smokes
tore off the plastic
removed the silver paper
i pulled out
two ciggies
i put one behind my ear
and dry sucked the other
i pushed the pack back
to the shop hack
he wobbled his lower jaw
trying to find
the right face
the right words
i let him have his fun
and then
i reached into my pocket
pulled out a two dollar coin
toss flipped
it in the air
right there
slapped it
on the back of my hand
HEADS
the clerk looked at me
like i'd lost my mind
"you gonna pay" he said
i gave him the coin
and replied
"microtransaction bitch!"
then i left...
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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Ok, now I want to follow you around