Mindful Observer
I like to discover the cause, effect, and connections

I visited the Ocean,
on a spring noon.
After the meet-and-greet,
as per my trait,
I walked on the sand,
to notice good and bad.
I checked the beach,
for traces of microplastics—
there weren’t any,
good to notice.
I gazed at the bluffs—
eroding fast.
A lavish house perched atop,
sitting precariously,
with grand Pacific views.
I wondered how long,
it would last
before toppling in.
A creek met the Ocean,
People frolicked in it.
Had they seen
the runoff that fed it?
Not the best place
to soak your body in.
I scanned the shoreline
for marine carcasses.
Dead whales and dolphins
have washed ashore,
in recent weeks,
all victims of algal bloom.
That’s who I am—
a mindful observer,
one who likes to find
cause, effect, and connections.
It’s my religion and ikigai.
About the Creator
Seema Patel
Hi, I am Seema. I have been writing on the internet for 15 years. I have contributed to PubMed, Blogger, Medium, LinkedIn, Substack, and Amazon KDP.
I write about nature, health, parenting, creativity, gardening, and psychology.
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Like always so enjoyable to read your work ⭐️⭐️⭐️😊
Wow, I now know the meaning of ikigai. Thank you for writing another masterpiece of social commentary poem!