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Mesmerized

patience is a virtue

By ezurates AngelPublished 4 years ago 1 min read
1599-rainbow spiral - this image by fracmeme

Currents of encouragement bubble up

Caressing me like strands of silk

Whispering songs of strength and finality

A thought of greatness lifts me high

Holding tight from the world around

Nothing feels better than this

I want it

I need it

It slips through my fingers

Falling away into nothing

I stretch myself in two reaching for the pieces

I backlash out of impatience

It cannot wait any longer

It must be mine

It must be now

It absolutely must be

Instant realization of my mistake...

I am back- Existing without it

Reality is crushing

Truly sorry...

I return to the starting line to try again

surreal poetry

About the Creator

ezurates Angel

Writing was my first true love.

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  • Test2 years ago

    Lovely writing. Sounds like my days sometimes💙Anneliese

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