
You looked at me;
The emptiness in your eyes was cruel to see.
You said,"I cannot cry."
"I cannot give or take or even try."
Your voice was hard and cold;
A sweet, young face turned old.
You said, "Once I loved but love is dead."
I wanted to whisper- sometimes love is sleeping.
I wrapped myself in sorrow;
I will wait for a bright new tomorrow.
When you come to me and say your love was only sleeping.
Wandering through life, too distracted to see open doors in my path;
Cold and empty landscapes held sorrow in its silence.
I come awake.
I see my love was caged and pained.
I let it out to heal the pain.
Scars form over the broken wound;
the veil lifts to feel once more.
Eventually beating in tune to life again.
I realized for all that time that my love was only sleeping.
About the Creator
ezurates Angel
Writing was my first true love.
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