Mentally Destroyed by you
A broken heart. A broken life
Mentally Destroyed By You
Mentally destroyed by you.
My mind, my bones, fractured, broken.
Bruises faded but stay in my mind.
Heart aches, hurts
like a free-flowing river—that is my blood.
One moment I feel happy,
next, good turns to dust.
You are gone from this life,
yet I still cry with etched pain.
It’s in my brain, I can’t understand
how can a person can inflict all that pain.
You died—that was the easy way out.
I am in limbo, left to ask why.
From 16 to 30 my life a mass of hurt
Just for loving a wicked wicked man
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Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
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Moving and relatable. Great piece.
Yay, Marie! Congrats on the TS! 😘
hallo good articel
A deep emotional trauma, such a moving poem. Congratulations on the top story! 🎉🥳🎉🥳
I inhaled your pain: impaled...again.
💙 Congrats on TS
I know this all too well. Great conveyance Of such a loss
I wish I didn't relate to this...So well done!
That came from a depth of soul few can articulate but YOU did! Masterfully done, and I do hope there was some catharsis in there for you big time. Top story kudos!
Definitely understand this kind of heartbreak! Great poem
Congratulations 🎉on Top Story!!!!
Deeply emotional and conveys the enduring pain and trauma of a lost love. The raw honesty makes it a powerful and poignant piece.
Healing takes long to heal especially when the hurt is deliberate
The sting 🐝 in the note 📝 wow! Well said!
So heartbreaking, but we'll written. Congrats on the TS.
narcissist betrayal will do that-great one and grats on ts
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yow, ow, this is a devastating, heartbreaking poem.
This is so heart wrenching!
so sad
Today I feel this way. To have given and given so much of my heart and soul into someone, just for them to throw me away like trash. I'm sorry if this is your pain and thank you for writing out a piece of mine and giving me a chance to read your words. Wishing you well.
A poem that does goes both ways in living life. Good job.