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Memories of Thee

An Acrostic Alexandrine

By Patrick M. OhanaPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Memories of thee and me before a tree’s crown

Eclectic remembrance of the moments we knew

More of the same will not come to pass like a clown

Ordained to pretend life is funny for a few

Remind me of your laugh when we saw the rainbow

Instilling the thought of the Sun and the mountain

Entertaining something darkened turning aglow

Signalling a pact between life and a fountain

O love of my youth when an idea of you

Furnished my room with future failures à la carte

Tantalising nonetheless every aspect’s clue

Heaven in your hair charting a path to your heart

Every moment without you spells the end within

Enveloped in blue with a white streak in a spin

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There are memories worth remembering and those that we take to the grave.

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Israel Kamakawiwo’ole - Somewhere Over the Rainbow/What a Wonderful World

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About the Creator

Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Very nicely done. I love acrostic poems.

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