Memories
Time Capsule Haiku Challenge
By Ash TaylorPublished 3 years ago • Updated 3 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by CHUTTERSNAP on Unsplash
My childhood fits in
Broken cardboard boxes I
Go through with my Mum.
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Ash Taylor
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Bachelors of Media and Communications, currently battling my way through a Masters in Journalism. Working in radio telling stories, and writing on the weekend. Making my way through my 400 odd backlog of books.
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Comments (3)
This was so nostalgic and wonderful! I loved it!
I love this! I can smell the old cardboard boxes while reading it 🙂
This is a beautiful image. Can I offer an idea to help it fit the Haiku (5/7/5) form? Ideas in quotes. First line as is. Second line - Broken cardboard boxes "I" (or some monosyllabic turn) Third line as is. Like I said, your image is beautiful. Feel free to tell me to hush up about the form.