Medusa: The True Legend Remembered
Poetry on a legend we cannot speak about
Most of us know Medusa as a monster...but few recall how Poseidon's treatment had turned her hair to snakes.
They say her gaze led to stoned glaze--
But few remember what turned tresses to snakes,
Some truths live in silence--untold.
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A victim reframed, a woman spurned,
Truths buried beneath a temple burned
Thrown and bound, with marble gags
Voices echoed through the cracks
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I said "no" in stone, to them I cursed
Snake-bitten tongues and truths reversed
Stained altars, tears touch my feet
They left me all alone to weep
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Tendrils of steel, bloomed from tears
Snakes that protect a soul that fears
Through the mire, I grew in strength--
Grew sharp thorns, of undue length
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Look at me, if you dare to hear
My eyes speak cracked truths that heedless fear
I freeze them, as they deny
On mock pedestals, they lie
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Unspoken courage, crawling from within
Each silence broken, a painful hymn
Though my eyes stun, leave poor souls in shame
Marble mouths do fear my name --
Medusa.
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Do take a minute to listen to her here:
Original poem by Michelle Liew. AI tags are coincidental.
Based on the Greek myth of Medusa as recounted by Ovid.
For Vocal's Things You Can't Say Out Loud Challenge:
And Poppy's #13 prompt
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.



Comments (7)
Wonderful retelling of the Medusa myth. No goddess is more in need of rehabilitation and a modern rethink. It is not coincidence that a patriarchal pantheon portrayed her a monster. Well done and good luck in the challenge.
Spectacular!!! Love it!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπ
Wow, this is such a great entry to the challenge, Michelle! Medusa shines in new colors.
Oh, this is good, Michelle
Great work! Carving out the real story
Medusa wasnβt born a monster. She was made one.
Unfathomably well done! Excellent take on this challenge Michelle!