Some moments, I will keep to myself, to us
private, hidden, protected, perfect.
Others, I will never find the right words to share
trying, writing, revising, deleting, trying again.
Fewer, I will put out into the world, tell everyone who will listen
proud, adoring, blissful, happy.
May they be enough to let you and everyone else know you are loved.
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This is so soft and beautiful. The rhythm of it, the quiet restraint, the love tucked between the lines, it says everything without shouting. That final line felt like a whisper and a hug at the same time. Thank you for sharing this. 💛🌻