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May as well upload this

It's bad but hey ho (I'm leaving plus today so may as well upload this draft that I never managed to make good)

By Some GuyPublished about a year ago 1 min read

I remember when I once loved you

When we ate tostas with coffee

You were drawing both my hands

Obsessed with my knuckles

Shading in my veins

Now you don't draw

I don't pose

We watch

Walls

First Draft

About the Creator

Some Guy

I kinda suck at writing but I enjoy it

Anyway, here's a dumb little haiku:

The gunslinger draws

His opponent does the same

oh dear, they both died

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  1. Masterful proofreading

    Zero grammar & spelling mistakes

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  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Enjoyed it

  • angela hepworthabout a year ago

    This isn’t bad at all! I liked it a lot.

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