When I think of her gentle thumb,
I recall how graceful and angelic it is.
Isn't it peculiar,
how sometimes we admire what seems to go commonly unnoticed?
█▓▒▒░░░Demystification ░░░▒▒▓█
How much time does this process even take?
I've been hearing this word a lot lately...
it bounces off the caverns of my psyche.
Every day, I collect one small puzzle piece more of the...
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Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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Awesome! Very thought provoking poem ✨
Ooooh, mysterious and poetic! Admiring a thumb like it’s a hidden treasure? Love it. Keep collecting, mastermind! ✨
How thought- provoking this is. Most people don't notice many body parts at all because they're focused on the obvious. I think mystification can graft in to one's "worldview" becoming deeply rooted...removing the shroud brings clarity in understanding something
Very nice 👍👍👍