Masked as Mother
Masks We Wear Challenge- entry #2

Masked as Mother
What's under- other
A cool demeanor
Hides something meaner
Often, I dreamt of someone other
To mow the lawn, make our grass greener
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Masked as Mother
Don't leave us, Father
He's off to work
Prelude, her smirk
Encounter, No, I needn't bother
Disguise gone, my sidestep, shirk
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Masked as Mother
Her love, no smother
Cold and distant
High-pitched rants
Indeed, so often hard to love her
Tween risen eyebrows, a cruel stance
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Masked as Mother
Beneath, a monster
A child's looming nightmare
Contrasting words, no doubt, impair
Family should equal loving each other
At a loss, I struggled with "welfare"
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Masked as Mother
I am now a mother
Seen the threat, lived her hell
Knowledge, power, lifts the spell
A fleur, a rose, she was always Mother
She did her best; she was just unwell
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Author's note: My second entry in the challenge reflects maternal depression, specifically Postpartum. A personal reflection of a time when culture-specific ideologies and society shunned all talk of struggling mental health. The masks women wore, and still wear in our modern day, while raising a family, should not be there.
About the Creator
Marilyn Glover
Poet, writer, & editor, writing to uplift humanity. A Spiritual person who practices Reiki and finds inspiration in nature.
Mother of four, grandmother of two, British American dual citizen living in the States



Comments (5)
Perfect
Excellent creation on point!!!
I agree, the mask shouldn't even be there. Loved your poem so much!
This is a powerful much-needed message and masterfully presented.
I love how each stanza peels back another layer of the “mask,” showing both pain and compassion. It's heartbreaking, but great work.