Amber embers rain
Falling from now-toxic skies
We could have changed
About the Creator
Jason Ray Morton
Writing has become more important as I live with cancer. It's a therapy, it's an escape, and it's a way to do something lasting that hopefully leaves an impression.
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Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
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Comments (12)
Very strong imagery!
so true
I totally agree! This is great! Thank you!
There's so much truth in your Haiku! Very well done!
Oooooh this one is really nice! Well done!
Well done!!!
Oh! the nerd in me is beaming. I super loved your use of "amber ember" (gorgeous!) and also how you made this rhyme. I'm a fan! :)
Nice message 👍
This is excellent!
I absolutely love this one, the first two words already had me hooked and you said so much in so little!!
This one deserves to be read. Excellent use of words.
Nice work, Jason and so very true. Incredible use of sparse words!