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Luminous Fire-Eyes

Formally known as Moon-Milk-Eyes

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 4 months ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read
Sera (Hazbin Hotel)

your halo sets atop your flaming eyes

Your luminous visage, so fraught with peril and fear

Collides with your soft milky voice

Tears that expose feminine wares

Soft pearl white

But as I notice your glassy mirrors

Luminous Fire-Eyes, you glare

My beloved Moon-Milk-Eyes has vanished

Not destroyed or lost, nor is she decimated

She has whipped the very Sea into submission

Luminous Fire-Eyes, you destroy thine enemies with precision

Luminous Fire-Eyes,

Larger than the universe

I tremble at your feet

Luminous Fire-Eyes,

Get out of my head

Luminous Fire-Eyes,

Why did you have to touch my heart

Only to have the greatest disappearing act

Luminous Fire-Eyes, dear goddess that trails the Appalachian Mountains in one dainty step

That towers over Everest with a gliding frown

Must I ask your forgiveness once more?

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About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran4 months ago

    Oooo, my favourite was the repetition. Loved your poem so much!

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