lullaby
A child's perspective.
By Lamar WigginsPublished 4 months ago • Updated 4 months ago • 1 min read
Photo by Sander Weeteling on Unsplash
tree, oh tree don't cry,
oh tree. take back your leaves and
make a smile for me...
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Lamar Wiggins
Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry.
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Comments (10)
I like your perspective on this. The leaves falling from the tree are like the falling of tears from this friend. All you wish is happiness for your friend. Great imagery. I really provokes innocent feelings. Well done!
so sweet
Loved the sweetness of this poem! Reminds me of being a kid in the fall again
Awww, this was so sweet. Loved it so much!
This has such a tender, almost childlike sweetness to it.
Ridiculously adorable!
Beautiful. Love the soft beauty of this one. Conveys a pure, almost childlike adoration and awe for our natural world
I like the concept of trees weeping leaves. It's a striking image. Beautiful haiku, Lamar. Good luck on the challenge!
Ooooo I like this one, slightly dark, slightly nursery rhyme. Great take
This feels like the rhythm of a traditional haiku, though the words are not. Great choices-