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Luca's Dream

Poetry for Ellie Hoove's Wonderland Challenge

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 8 months ago 1 min read
Luca's Dream
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Take a break...before one takes you.

☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️

Head

in hands

Luca sits

Coffee untouched

Hair frazzled

With mirror

unchecked

☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️Sleeps

Drifts

In a lift

Buttons

Push back

It

Crashes

☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️

Luca

Still sits

At her

Desk

A mount

Of white sheets

Untouched

Forehead

Lined

☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️

Lift stops

At each floor

Buttons

Push Back

It nearly

Plunges

☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️

Luca

lies

on a

Deck chair

Taking

Tiny sips

Of

Pina

Colada.

☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️ ☁️

Original poem by Michelle Liew. AI tags are coincidental.

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Susan Fourtané 8 months ago

    Lovely poem. I loved the pina colada. 🍹

  • Mother Combs8 months ago

    yum, pina colada <3

  • Ah but if only. Loved your poem!

  • Daniel Millington8 months ago

    I love the style of this.

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