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Love?

Fifty Words, or Else...

By Kendall Defoe Published 11 months ago โ€ข Updated 11 months ago โ€ข 1 min read
Love?
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Let's see...

What do I think of

cheap words and bad chocolate?

My story untold?

It ain't me.

*

I sit,

with the screen

after lectures, marks.

Thoughts are hard to help.

They aren't me.

*

I see

no words

to get this right.

And I know...

It escapes me.

I try, Bill. I try...

*

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  • Test11 months ago

    This poem is a poignant reflection of our longing for authenticity. Self-awareness begins with the perception and recognition of bright vibrations, whether in the form of words, thoughts, or emotions.

  • I agreeโ€ฆ Love is tricky to adequately express in wordsโ€ฆ especially only 50!๐Ÿฅน

  • Love is beyond words. But I'd rather have bad chocolates than no chocolates hehehehe

  • Sid Aaron Hirji11 months ago

    Haha cheap words and bad chocolate. Sums up lustful valentines

  • The truth for far too many in such time of division & isolation.

  • Shirley Belk11 months ago

    To me, love is a verb that can stand the test of time, so I very much relate! Well done!

  • Mother Combs11 months ago

    You found the perfect words when you wrote Cheap words and bad chocolate. You hit it all right on the nose.

  • JBaz11 months ago

    Cheap words and bad chocolate Thatโ€™s Valentineโ€™s Day.

  • Caroline Craven11 months ago

    I think you do have the words. This was just perfect.

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