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Love’s light lost

Ask me in December

By Raymond G. TaylorPublished 2 years ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read
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Ask me in December.

Don’t ask me to remember

Your gentle touch,

Our fleeting brush with..

Well, you know.

Romantic illusion, youthful delusion,

Unbreakable connection. Your recollection?

Mine is sweet. Bitter? Perhaps.

Let’s not dwell on that,

Because we were young, full of..

Well, love.. if love’s what it was.

Yes, that’s the word. Absurd, it may seem.

Half in a dream, we fell into longing,

Or at least into bed and, it has to be said,

The gymnastics were welcome

And seldom repeated to that serene level.

It’s hard now to capture

The bliss, the rapture, wrought from the fact that we shagged the night through,

Knew what we wanted, took it,

Embraced it: our base, lustful need.

Greedily celebrating our passion, possession,

Love’s new-found lesson.

A time long ago, now, hard to know

How we fell for each other.

Another age, past, the bliss couldn’t last.

I hear now the eulogy, passive invitee.

Your husband, children, friends, family.

How did you know her?

Friend, I will say,

Long time ago,

Mere acquaintance, you know.

Cling to April’s spring memory,

Now in my autumn, your winter full come.

Ask me in December,

When my days are done.

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Submitted to:

With many thanks to Babs for the inspiration.

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Thanks for reading

Ray

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About the Creator

Raymond G. Taylor

Author living in Kent, England. Writer of short stories and poems in a wide range of genres, forms and styles. A non-fiction writer for 40+ years. Subjects include art, history, science, business, law, and the human condition.

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  • Susan Fourtané 4 months ago

    So, this is your second choice for the second performance. It's hard to decide because this is, too, rather emotional. I'll read them again and then get back with the verdict to the performance post.

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    Excellent words and a surprise ending. Well done, Ray!

  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    A wonderful piece for the challenge :)

  • Christy Munson2 years ago

    Lovely

  • Kageno Hoshino2 years ago

    Now that's poetry!

  • Mark Graham2 years ago

    A true poem of Love and Life. Beautiful and thought provoking.

  • This was so poignantly beautiful! Loved your poem so much!

  • Mariann Carroll2 years ago

    Excellent poetry 👏🏽

  • John Cox2 years ago

    This is an extraordinary poem, Ray! I absolutely loved the beauty, emotion and lyricism of it!

  • Lovely lovely lovely!

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Awesome!!! Loved it!!!💕❤️❤️

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