Love Organically
Ekphrastic Challenge September 2023
This poem was written in response to the Rattle® Poetry Ekphrastic Challenge for September 2023 and was ultimately not selected. You can find more information here.
https://www.rattle.com/ekphrastic/
Love Organically
Baby, put down the phone
Turn off the technology
Raise your eyes upward
And reach your hands out to me
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Don’t let the text do the talking
Let your lips speak the words
Breathe them onto my neck
Sweet things the darkness overheard
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Don’t send me pictures of a flower
Bring me real ones in a vase
I won’t send you back a smiley
Instead, I’ll show you on my face
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To hear the naturalness of your voice
Distorted not through a phone
To touch your face and see with eyes
Not behind a camera lens shown
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Don’t communicate in gifs and memes
Tell me exactly what you desire
Look deep into my eyes
And I will show you the emoji “fire”
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Let me feel the warmth of your flesh
As your body lies on top of mine
I want none of that robotic-ness
Of that electronic device of thine
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For that thing with constant dings
Its distraction fills the air
So silence all but our breathing
As I run my fingers through your hair
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And I will lay my head upon your chest
After all our love is through
We will whisper to each other
And speak as lovers do
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Skin to skin, the human heart
Not cold glass and metal seam
We must be face-to-face to love
The way people were meant to be
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Open the entirety of your soul
In all its vulnerability
But set aside those electronics
That have corrupted humanity
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So baby, put down the phone
Turn off the technology
And I will do the same
Come, let us love organically
Submitted under MRB
About the Creator
Rae Fairchild (MRB)
I love to write; putting pen to paper fills my heart and calms my soul!
Rae Fairchild is my pen name. (Because why not? Pseudonyms are cool!)
I do publish elsewhere under my real name, M.R.B.


Comments (3)
This is so true! Love it🌻
This is what happens when technology takes over. I'm so sorry this was not selected. I loved your poem!
Organic love is the best love!