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Love

survives beyond our lives

By Luna JordanPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
Love
Photo by Mayur Gala on Unsplash

Loss is devastating.

Over the years, the pain dampens but never fades.

Vacant spaces will replace memories.

Even so, love survives beyond our lives.

Was trying to edit a short fiction, so I could post it, but it was taking all day; some stuff just wasn't working and I still have paragraphs to rewrite to sound better (it feels sloppy). So, here's a quick little poem instead.

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Luna Jordan

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  • ROCK aka Andrea Polla (Simmons)5 months ago

    I L.O.V.E. your meaningful acrostic.

  • Caroline Craven5 months ago

    Sometimes it’s better to have vacant spaces than memories. This was great Luna.

  • Oh no, I hope you get to work through it. Loved your Acrostic!

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