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love is an eternal flame

My final goodbye

By David WilliamsPublished 3 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - October 2025
love is an eternal flame
Photo by Cedrik Wesche on Unsplash

As the darkness swells

a single flame illuminates the page

My sweet Annmarie, I am afraid this will be the last you hear from me.

My final goodbye to the woman I love

You are my light in the darkness.

Your face is all I see now.

as this lantern shines for me to write

You have shined for me to love

to share the light you give

has been the biggest gift

hold onto your light, my dear

continue to be the light in the dark

Your light is too bright to dim.

I can see you now dancing.

You move so gracefully.

like this light in my lantern

You are warm, you are bright.

My light here is fading.

Please carry my light with you, my dear

Every time you use a lantern, remember me.

And remember how you gave me light.

until the very end,

Goodbye, my love, my Annmarie

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About the Creator

David Williams

My ideas far exceed my writing capabilities!

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  • Rowan Finley 2 months ago

    Such palpable energy here.

  • Narghiza Ergashova3 months ago

    Nice writing

  • Famepedia3 months ago

    Good πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

  • Famepedia3 months ago

    Good πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

  • Marie381Uk 3 months ago

    Beautiful poem β­οΈπŸ¦‹β­οΈπŸ†

  • Aarish3 months ago

    This piece captures the tenderness of love meeting loss with breathtaking vulnerability. The imagery of light and lanterns beautifully symbolizes memory and devotion beyond death.

  • Lenn Marcus3 months ago

    Love the simple way the message is carried in your piece. Its clean. And the way it give that picture of writing in the dark feel with the lamp as the source of light. Perfect Image.

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