steering clear from marasmus
avoiding accidents of all sorts
keeping a tight grip
on the core of things
positive thoughts in charge
can beat wrong ways
jumping through experiences
like a pro
writing about the bad sort
creating characters based on them
malign misunderstandings, judgement jolt
surviving sicknesses and sneers
About the Creator
Moon Desert
UK-based
BA in Cultural Studies
Crime Fiction: Love
Poetry: Friend
Psychology: Salvation
Where the wild roses grow full of words...
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Comments (5)
"We will go on...."
such a lovely positive piece <3
love for life
This was deeply inspiring. I love the positive vibe it exudes, the confidence it draws out of the reader, and the way you teach us to aim for that tight grip on the core of things. If we take your words into consideration, if we apply it, we can have a much fuller life. Thank you for writing this nourishing piece Maggie 👏🏽🙏🏽🤗♥️
Channel that positively and let it flow. The more often you do it, the more proficient you become at it-- just like writing, which clearly you have knack for. ⚡💙⚡