
Around her, transparent, ghost-like echoes of her words and emotions float, indicating her attempts to reach out and the lack of response.
Louder but Unheard
I forgive your unresponsive ways,
How my cries, like unseen ghosts, strayed.
I've questioned my presence,
Visible, yet unacknowledged—
As if my soul lacks essence.
Do you perceive me in the flow,
Or sense my shadow's faint glow?
Heart open, incognito,
I've shouted in my mind's echo.
Yet, in your silence, I find a clue,
Forgiving, for how could you have heard?
About the Creator
Dr. Eldy
Dr. Eldy has a passion for poetry and storytelling. Through the art of weaving words together, she seeks to share her life story. By embracing the natural flow of life and she seeks to capture its essence in every written piece.


Comments (2)
your language is so rich and descriptive!
This is beautiful ♥️