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Lost in the Screen

By Amina Aamir

By verse voyagerPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Lost in the Screen
Photo by ROBIN WORRALL on Unsplash

Codes and screens our modern tools

Yet in their glow true connection cools

Respect for elders, far forgotten

Fabric of affection, scattered like cotton

No place in heart for feeling and emotion

Soul is barren, a desolated ocean

So much is paid on internet bills

No one cares where humanity kills

In digital rush, our kindness falls

unaware of where, humanity calls

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About the Creator

verse voyager

✨ Storyteller | Dreamer | Poet

📚 Sharing pieces of my heart through words

💡 For more stories and emotions, find me on Wattpad @Verse_Voyager17 💛

Let’s get lost in a world of words together!

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  • Latoria Hallabout a year ago

    You are speaking the truth. Great job!

  • Marie381Uk about a year ago

    A truth of the way we live for today well don’t my lovexx

  • ᔕᗩᗰ ᕼᗩᖇTYabout a year ago

    So true!!! Great poem!

  • Shirley Belkabout a year ago

    So true....powerful writing

  • Gabriela Trofin-Tatárabout a year ago

    Nice with some hard truths.

  • Abrahamabout a year ago

    That's a very good message

  • Komalabout a year ago

    That's the bitter truth! Beautifully written! :)

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    That's an impactful statement! It's the truth. Excellent job! ✨

  • Bossabout a year ago

    thats the sad truth...keep up the good work

  • L.I.Eabout a year ago

    Wow this is powerful, and have a great message. Its the sad truth of what is happening.

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