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Losing Control

For Paul and John's Three Word Haiku/Senryu Unofficial Challenge

By Julie LacksonenPublished about 16 hours ago 1 min read
Losing Control
Photo by Duncan Shaffer on Unsplash

Humiliating,

Undifferentiating,

Overpowering

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Thank you, Paul and John for the inspiration. It's amazing what you can say with three words.

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Julie Lacksonen

Julie has been a music teacher at a public school in Arizona since 1987. She enjoys writing, reading, walking, swimming, and spending time with family.

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  • Andrea Corwin about 8 hours ago

    Good one!

  • Aarsh Malikabout 11 hours ago

    The word choice is impeccable. ‘Undifferentiating’ especially lingered in my mind.

  • Paul Stewartabout 13 hours ago

    Thank you for taking part and if such a biting examination of modern times! Ive subscribed to you, as wasn't already so looking forward to reading more by you! thank you again for taking part!

  • Marie381Uk about 16 hours ago

    Fabulous well done 🏆🦋🦋🦋

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡about 16 hours ago

    Great use of three words to highlight our current nightmare! Very impressive! ⚡💙 Bill ⚡

  • Nicely written ❤️ 👌

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