loom
a haiku
A door unspools black
One bough brands the groping moon.
Nimble fingers…pluck.
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Mackenzie Davis
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Comments (10)
This was so eery Mackenzie!! Congrats on placing runner-up in the haunted echoes challenge!
I love the creepy effect of this haiku, Mackenzie. Congratulations on your win!👏
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Great job Mackenzie! Congratulations on runner up!
Congratulations!
Disconcerting and mysterious. Lovely.
Spooky! Love it!
such an eerie tapping
Clever clogs, pishposh. Making a mockery of my mockery. lol. My most recent entry is ... lol. All that to say, well done, lassie!
Ooh, this one sent a shiver down my spine, so eerie!