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Long Deep Love Message for Her

A letter written in moonlight, meant for the one who holds my heartbeat.

By Emma Published 5 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - August 2025
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I have loved you

in the quiet before dawn,

when the air is still

and the world has not yet learned its own name.

I have loved you

in the rain’s gentle applause,

each drop clapping softly

for the miracle of your breath.

Your voice is a low candle flame—

steady, warm, and unafraid of the dark.

It lights the corners of me

where no one else has walked.

When you smile,

it feels like the first time spring dared to bloom.

A thousand petals open in my chest,

and the air becomes easier to breathe.

I would cross every season for you—

winter with its silent teeth,

summer with its hungry sun,

autumn with its crumbling gold.

Not because love is easy,

but because it is you.

The one whose name I carry

like a secret prayer on my tongue.

So hear me now—

you are my beginning and my rest,

my longest journey and my closest home.

And if the stars ever fall,

I will gather them all,

and write your name in their glow,

so the whole night will know

the only truth I’ve ever owned:

I am yours, and yours alone.

Thank you for reading ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

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  • Zakir Ullah5 months ago

    Amazing

  • Aspen Noble5 months ago

    This was breathtaking. The imagery is gentle but powerful, like a whispered promise that lingers. I loved the lines about carrying their name like a secret prayer. So intimate and soulful. You've captured something timeless about devotion here. Beautiful work.

  • Irfan Ali5 months ago

    This is absolutely breathtaking — every line feels like it’s wrapped in warmth and devotion. 🌹 The imagery is so vivid that I could almost feel the rain, see the petals bloom, and hear the quiet before dawn. Such a tender, timeless expression of love — truly beautiful. ❤️✨

  • Mahmood Afridi5 months ago

    Congratulations on your Top Story 🎉🥳

  • Mariann Carroll5 months ago

    Beautiful ❤️

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