Long Deep Love Message for Her
A letter written in moonlight, meant for the one who holds my heartbeat.

I have loved you
in the quiet before dawn,
when the air is still
and the world has not yet learned its own name.
I have loved you
in the rain’s gentle applause,
each drop clapping softly
for the miracle of your breath.
Your voice is a low candle flame—
steady, warm, and unafraid of the dark.
It lights the corners of me
where no one else has walked.
When you smile,
it feels like the first time spring dared to bloom.
A thousand petals open in my chest,
and the air becomes easier to breathe.
I would cross every season for you—
winter with its silent teeth,
summer with its hungry sun,
autumn with its crumbling gold.
Not because love is easy,
but because it is you.
The one whose name I carry
like a secret prayer on my tongue.
So hear me now—
you are my beginning and my rest,
my longest journey and my closest home.
And if the stars ever fall,
I will gather them all,
and write your name in their glow,
so the whole night will know
the only truth I’ve ever owned:
I am yours, and yours alone.
Thank you for reading ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
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Amazing
This was breathtaking. The imagery is gentle but powerful, like a whispered promise that lingers. I loved the lines about carrying their name like a secret prayer. So intimate and soulful. You've captured something timeless about devotion here. Beautiful work.
This is absolutely breathtaking — every line feels like it’s wrapped in warmth and devotion. 🌹 The imagery is so vivid that I could almost feel the rain, see the petals bloom, and hear the quiet before dawn. Such a tender, timeless expression of love — truly beautiful. ❤️✨
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Beautiful ❤️