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lies of loving, wanting - purposeful
deceipts for your desires alone -
then you felt trapped, so pushed for
control. my Warrior
soul fought your farce, changed
locks, stopped entry.
done for good.
your son,
mine
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Comments (10)
Excellent Breakup Nonet… tragically sad!
Hope everything works out for you and yours. Good work.
This is so poignant, Andrea but really tells how it is now, and we women must find the strength. I hope you and your son are thriving! Thanks for sharing.
This holds a lot of lament. Great nonet, Andrea.
Your words capture the finality of letting go and moving forward, reclaiming your own power, may your path continue to be filled with healing and the love and happiness you and your son deserve, great work, all the best wishes!
I'm so sorry but I don't really understand. If you don't mind, could you please explain it to me? 😅
Oh my, I hadn't thought about this being about your son till I glimpsed lana's comment. Heartbreaking.
Oh my, I was breaking my head if this is a breakup with the husband or tough love for the son. Great nonet, Andrea!
Wow this was short and highly moving! I feel like this could be about many different things, thank you for this! Great…
Whoa, my friend. Great twist at the end! And yes, relationships are ironic, aren't they?