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Loan

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By Aspen Marie Published 5 months ago Updated 5 months ago 1 min read
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Beauty and desire

Are not the same

Though they are

Friendly bedfellows

Who spend time together

Intertwined forms

Enjoying Sunday afternoons

Beauty is a matter

Of disinterested pleasure

Anything may be beautiful

There is nothing transactional

To be had

Desire demands possession

For true fulfillment

See ME

Touch ME

Let ME kiss YOU

From head to toe

And all the lush places

That lie in between

We may covet beauty

That elicits desire

Within ourselves, or

Desire’s pulse; beauty in absentia

Raw and ugly elements

May strike passion’s match

Without care for

Fire’s reach

Does transcendental beauty

Justify illicit eye gazing

In real life

Or does it merely shimmer

Across paper pages

Youth do not believe in either

Amidst old folks

Trusting glossy media

To tell them what’s what

They cannot know

For they have not yet

Fallen for the line

Of his shoulders

As he washes dishes

Or ached to kiss

The birthmark

Near the soft lines

Of her mouth

Years I have spent

Touching with my eyes

Longing to reach out

Those who cannot see

Beauty within themselves

Do not know

It still radiates outward

Pulling those worthy

Into orbit

I have suffered afflictions

Heart and body

Crying out for succour

Only their presence

May bring

Time softens

All sharp edges

But I wish

It would not dull

The serrations of

Desire’s teeth

Cutting bone

Rending flesh

Skin fades to parchment

Colour bleeds from

Formerly red lips

Falling from

Mouth’s pursing furrows

Have no fear

Such weak trivialities

Do not matter

Hot breath on your lover’s

Shadowed places

Lends beauty

By desire

Until its very last

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Aspen Marie

In love with life and all of its foibles.

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  • Paul Stewart4 months ago

    Oh this was a heady mix of sensual and philosophical and so apt. touching with eyes is a great descriptor and those passionate lines were heated elegance! strong work, marie!

  • Caitlin Charlton5 months ago

    A beautiful...almost ...birds eye view on what beauty and desire leads to. How to see it, feel it. What stifles or distort them. I like the mention of or the zooming in of a man's shoulder line when he washes the dishes. I like the philosophical musing and the frustration worded — when youth trust glossy media to tell them whats what. I came away learning that the ones who spend the most time really looking are, photographers, writers, artists in general — the ones who can pave the way to gift us their eyes, so we too can see the beauty in ourselves and others. Not what the media choose to show. Fantastic work Aspen 🤗❤️

  • Komal5 months ago

    Ufff sweetie!!! This one glows with raw ache and wisdom!! You’ve made them lovers, rivals, and mirrors all at once.💖

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  • "Colour bleeds from Formerly red lips" I especially loved these lines. And succour is a new word for me hehehe

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