lo-la-Lover
for my special person, because seven years is a long time

navy blue
is how I love you
all the deep and dark
parts you try to hide
and all the goodness
you have inside
-
crimson red
until we are dead
the world will unfold
and I’ll be at your side
always making sure to
keep up with your stride
-
forest green
the slightest sheen
of tears in my eyes
you’ve embrace the darkness
yet you’re tired of lies
made sick by no bliss
sometimes it feels like
we’re stuck in the pits
-
pale purple
we live in this circle
of life
it hurts and it kills
it frightens the mind
but with your hand in mine
I think we might make it
-
inky black
we’re under attack
by a million unmade decisions
if only we could revert
back in time just a bit
waking up might not hurt
as much
-
dark pink
my hands stained with ink
your eyes marred with doubt
no peace in your mind
thoughts whip around harshly
no answers to find
-
light grey
please stay
hold me here all night
and rock me to sleep
be my escape
from this dread that creeps
in like the morning light
-
sky blue
I love you
but I don’t love myself
and I’m scared of the shadows
lurking under your shelf
-
soft brown
we sit down
and we breathe
and we live
we deceive
we feel shame
we share smiles
we forgive
-
turquoise
I’m not poised
to be like you are
strong-willed and so adamant
so I learn from you
by watching, I’m soothed
praying I’ll change a bit
starting to glow a tint
-
orange-yellow
I’ve always been mellow
you love me for it
not for the weakness it’s held
in the past, but for my brightness
that gleams in the dark where I dwell
-
color of sand
I mark this land
as yours and mine
it isn’t perfect
and I know we mess up
time after time
but I know we will make it
I glisten; you shine
-
Thanks for reading :)
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Sudais Zakwan
Sudais Zakwan – Storyteller of Emotions
Sudais Zakwan is a passionate story writer known for crafting emotionally rich and thought-provoking stories that resonate with readers of all ages. With a unique voice and creative flair.
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Amazing Poem
This poem beautifully balances vulnerability and devotion. The way you explore both light and shadow in your relationship adds so much emotional honesty.