
Just as the world tilts forward,
the path narrows to nothing
but crushed stone and faith.
My boots grip loose shale
while the canyon opens
like a hole that's been waiting.
Wind rises from below,
carrying the scent of sage
and bear droppings,
fresh enough to be scared.
The trail marker warns:
Proceed at your own risk.
But risk is relative
when you've already walked
three miles up
and the only way back
is down.
My backpack shifts.
A pebble breaks free,
tumbles into silence
so deep I never hear it land.
Ahead, the path curves
around rock face,
disappears into air
and possibility.
My next step waits
on a path I can't see,
trusting ground
that might not exist.
I walk forward.
And the mountain pushes me.
Everything balances
on the edge
of letting go.
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.


Comments (5)
Excellent take on the challenge! Vividly portrayed… I especially like: “ My next step waits on a path I can't see, trusting ground that might not exist.” I’m holding my breath.
Spectacular nature poem!!! Loved the ending!!!❤️❤️💕
Wonderfully done! I can feel the fear. Keep up the great work ;-)
This is terrifying for me as I'm afraid of heights. Loved your poem!
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