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Living on the Edge

Cliffside Trail, Utah

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 6 months ago 1 min read

Just as the world tilts forward,

the path narrows to nothing

but crushed stone and faith.

My boots grip loose shale

while the canyon opens

like a hole that's been waiting.

Wind rises from below,

carrying the scent of sage

and bear droppings,

fresh enough to be scared.

The trail marker warns:

Proceed at your own risk.

But risk is relative

when you've already walked

three miles up

and the only way back

is down.

My backpack shifts.

A pebble breaks free,

tumbles into silence

so deep I never hear it land.

Ahead, the path curves

around rock face,

disappears into air

and possibility.

My next step waits

on a path I can't see,

trusting ground

that might not exist.

I walk forward.

And the mountain pushes me.

Everything balances

on the edge

of letting go.

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶6 months ago

    Excellent take on the challenge! Vividly portrayed… I especially like: “ My next step waits on a path I can't see, trusting ground that might not exist.” I’m holding my breath.

  • Babs Iverson6 months ago

    Spectacular nature poem!!! Loved the ending!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Tammy Castleman6 months ago

    Wonderfully done! I can feel the fear. Keep up the great work ;-)

  • This is terrifying for me as I'm afraid of heights. Loved your poem!

  • K.B. Silver 6 months ago

    👏👏👏

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