Dear Shatterer of Dreams,
When you chose me, I was ecstatic. In choosing back, I was emphatic,
but your sweet words did not match your actions.
I should have known better.
I followed directions to the letter, as I put pen to paper,
dreaming of our whispered future together.
I did my part, and then, in your sudden silence, I waited, watched, wondered - what was the truth?
I asked for clarity. And change. And follow through;
while I quietly debated - what to do? I refuse to put up anymore
with your excuses, your antics.
We parted ways magnanimously, no dramatics,
even though you forgot my name.
Sincerely,
The Nameless Writer
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KJ Aartila
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Comments (8)
Sounds like a writers worst nightmare. It better that you part ways and look for someone who shows you the respect you deserve. ❤️
This is so well done but sorry that happened to you!
Oh goodness, this is sad :( But screw those people!! You're too good for their bs. I hope you find the right place that values you and your amazing skills. Hugs.
This feels like your publisher broke up with you and that's just so heartbreaking 😭😭😭😭 I hope you are okay Keila 🥺🥺🥺
Oh man, I felt the emotions here and the little daggers to the heart. Been there. ❤️ Sorry this happened, but powerful poem! 🥹❤️
Well said. Kind of sucks to be f**ked over by people like that.
ugh. Sorry for the experience. Great way to get it out, though. Well done.
oh no! This must have been so gutwrenching... I'm sorry that this was your experience 😥😥