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Tickety-tock
Zenith and over, standstill.
A time doesn’t cease.
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Deasun T. Smyth
Eighteen years ago… I was born into the wind-swept lands of the prairies – where I regularly fly on dragons and battle goblin kings.
I'm a First Nation's wannabe writer, trying to survive college...
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So very true 👍
I don't often connect with Haikus (especially since most of them aren't even written correctly), but this one, I did. I think your photo here enhances it because it reinforces that while we try to contain time to the limited construct of our own perception, it stops or slows, for no one. WELL WRITTEN!