Little Star
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I lay in Bed alone at night...
Burning candles, instead of Obscuring the lights...
Thoughts Flicker but melt like wax.
wondering if we could Endure this love story...
Or Can This love story Survive us?
I thought this would be over by now...
Geriatric Thoughts Laying Heavy on my Sanity...
My heart is like doubt turned inside out.
Sauntering in my loneliness and looking for a Star to hope on...
I gaze from my window...
Little Star
Little Star
Grant my Desire,
Bring me the Love,
Of My Used Hearts fascination.
Change the colors of my Blue Reality.
Assemble me yellow with the Liveliness of the Sun...
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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This was so powerful and emotional!
Beautiful poem.
Enjoyed this beautiful poem of longing for true love, it will come at the right time when you least expect it ❤️🌹🥰🎁
"Thoughts Flicker but melt like wax." and "Assemble me yellow with the Liveliness of the Sun..." What satisfying ripples the wordstones you throw create!
Soooo beautiful, Lonzo!! 😍😍 “ Thoughts Flicker but melt like wax” - WOW 🥹❤️ You are so talented!!
Wow so much feelings. I love it ✨❤️
Very lovely and gentle thoughts.
beautiful
Beautiful
You are an amazing poet ❤️
So many beautifully crafted lines, this is a good poem
Nostalgic 👌🦋