Lined Up Planets Now The Action Begins
A new dawn and a new way of life

Lined Up Planets Now The Action Begins
Tonight, the planets stood in a row,
A quiet glow, a magnificent show.
I stepped outside, the air was cold,
The sky a sight to behold.
I closed my eyes, a wish took flight,
A whispered hope into the night.
The stars,like diamonds they did shine,
Each distant spark a secret sign.
Though silent, the heavens seemed to hear,
A silent promise drawing near.
And as the planets held their place,
I felt a calm, a quiet grace.
And as the hours slowly passed,
The night held dreams made last.
Yet every star, so sharp, so clear,
Seemed close enough to draw me near.
I whispered thoughts I couldn’t speak,
Of silent wants, of what I seek.
The planets gleamed, a silent choir,
Their distant glow a quiet fire.
And though the dawn would chase the dark,
I kept a wish, a hidden spark.
For even when the night is through,
The sky will remember the alinement
As I surely will ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️


Comments (2)
This is beautiful!! I saw super bright Venus and the north triangle in the sky with clear skies. You captured it beautifully and I loved your ryhming.
nice you got a look?