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Lined Up Planets Now The Action Begins

A new dawn and a new way of life

By Marie381Uk Published 11 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Lined Up Planets Now The Action Begins

Tonight, the planets stood in a row,

A quiet glow, a magnificent show.

I stepped outside, the air was cold,

The sky a sight to behold.

I closed my eyes, a wish took flight,

A whispered hope into the night.

The stars,like diamonds they did shine,

Each distant spark a secret sign.

Though silent, the heavens seemed to hear,

A silent promise drawing near.

And as the planets held their place,

I felt a calm, a quiet grace.

And as the hours slowly passed,

The night held dreams made last.

Yet every star, so sharp, so clear,

Seemed close enough to draw me near.

I whispered thoughts I couldn’t speak,

Of silent wants, of what I seek.

The planets gleamed, a silent choir,

Their distant glow a quiet fire.

And though the dawn would chase the dark,

I kept a wish, a hidden spark.

For even when the night is through,

The sky will remember the alinement

As I surely will ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Andrea Corwin 11 months ago

    This is beautiful!! I saw super bright Venus and the north triangle in the sky with clear skies. You captured it beautifully and I loved your ryhming.

  • Sid Aaron Hirji11 months ago

    nice you got a look?

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